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I'm waiting for the clock to slow
For time to stop
The notes to flow

I'm waiting for the tears to stop
Hoping that the wounds will heal
Praying that this isn't real

I'm waiting for the world to stop spinning
A new beginning
Another shot at living

I'm waiting for a helping hand
A little bit of guidance
I just want someone to understand


I'm waiting for the dream to come true


I'm waiting for all of this waiting to end
©2009 ~Mac-Ster
:iconmac-ster:

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Yeah, I'm pretty sure that I abused the word.

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:iconcopper-princess666:
I really liked it, very well done!
you didn't really abuse the word, most poems use one word alot anyways ;)

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“Oh yes,It is far more comforting to think God listened and said no than to think that nobodys out there”Have a Little Faith- Mitch Album
"The whole purpose of religions is to facilitate love and compassion, patience,tolerance, humility, forgiveness"Dalai
:iconmac-ster:
Thank you! :)

Yeah, that's true. I'm sure if I really wanted to I could throw it in there another dozen times. Though by then I don't think it would be as good xD
:iconcopper-princess666:
welcome ^_^

you probably could XD

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“Oh yes,It is far more comforting to think God listened and said no than to think that nobodys out there”Have a Little Faith- Mitch Album
"The whole purpose of religions is to facilitate love and compassion, patience,tolerance, humility, forgiveness"Dalai
:iconmac-ster:
It would be easy, but it would eventually lose it's feel.
:iconcopper-princess666:
:nod: most likely

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“Oh yes,It is far more comforting to think God listened and said no than to think that nobodys out there”Have a Little Faith- Mitch Album
"The whole purpose of religions is to facilitate love and compassion, patience,tolerance, humility, forgiveness"Dalai

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